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Same routine by ~Misery-pain-love:iconMisery-pain-love:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Free & Blank Verse


Rip this script to pieces and spit at the scene
Being so easily used, so easily fooled,
Most degrading

Making me feel so..
Filthy inside
a whore
so Used up
Dried out and old
That not even the most
Desperate of people
Would accept it
No,
Not yesturdays news
It's too ugly inside
To accept

So keep sleeping at night
Keep drinking coffee
and going to work
Coming home


Keep to you're same pathetic routine
Thats dulled you're edges so much
and has made you with no more life than
A robotic copycat

Because life is easier to handle when
You don't take risks
and you're just another face fading into the crowd
©2009-2010 ~Misery-pain-love
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:icontoaakatsuki:
*ToaAkatsuki Mar 1, 2009, 8:47:46 AM
Ah, yes.

Reminds me of this Nine Inch Nails song, actually. xD lmao

I'm scared of this, actually. I'm scared about the choices I'll make in life, in terms of career, and, heck, everything, because I just can't think of a routine I'd want to repeat every day.

I really like this. Nice work. I now have a freaky stigma of capital letters though. xD Don't know if you've noticed, but I've started writing all my stuff in lower-case, just because I feel it flows better. :P So that's what I would've done different if I were you, but it's really a personal thing.

Also, in the second-to-last stanza, "you're" should be "your", I believe. ;)

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
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~Misery-pain-love Mar 2, 2009, 4:34:09 PM
I actually like how broken up this piece sounds when you read it *don't know why*
It's just like how I think people look better with messy hair

I suck at you're and your, still don't know why they have to be so a like but meh, thank you :)

--
Love is a chemical imbalance in the brain.
:icontoaakatsuki:
*ToaAkatsuki Mar 2, 2009, 5:21:47 PM
lol, alright. xD

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
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~MysticalTemptress Mar 1, 2009, 7:58:51 AM
Wow that was excellent!

--
Ways to Relieve Stress #10. Make up a language and ask people for directions.

Obsession isn't a bad thing... but a really strange form of dedication. -meh
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~Xx-LoStLiNk-xX Feb 27, 2009, 1:56:23 PM
Dear, this is lovely:hug:
I nbetween, I thought all the time where you are? you haven't posted anything for a while :glomp:

--
Ich schreie vor Schmerz und weiss
Dein Herz kann mich hören
Mais ma voix se cloître sous cette terre
Einsam liege ich auf deinem kalten Stein
Dark Sanctuary-Dein kalter Stein

~PwincessnaveeraKeep smiling!:blowkiss:
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~Misery-pain-love Mar 4, 2009, 3:41:59 PM
Yea, I'm having less and less things to write about now :), It still suprises me when I get a comment from you, lol :hug:

--
Love is a chemical imbalance in the brain.
:iconxx-lostlink-xx:
~Xx-LoStLiNk-xX Mar 5, 2009, 5:16:00 AM
it surprises you? Why? hug:

--
Ich schreie vor Schmerz und weiss
Dein Herz kann mich hören
Mais ma voix se cloître sous cette terre
Einsam liege ich auf deinem kalten Stein
Dark Sanctuary-Dein kalter Stein

~PwincessnaveeraKeep smiling!:blowkiss:
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